In the final paper that I wrote for English 110 I believe that this was my best essay with the least amount local revisions I needed to make. In each paper that I write I try to read over the paper a couple times before I hand it in.  But, with this paper I changed things up.  I did the same thing with reading it a couple of times before I handed it in but this time I had my roommate read it over to make sure that I was missing anything.  I think that played a huge role in the amount of local revisions that I needed to make.

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